Ek naya chorr nazr aane laga hai
Dhadkte dil kae dard ko
Sehnae mien ab maza aana laga hai
Kaafila jo aagey badh geya thaa
Mud kar wapis aane laga hai
Tanha zindagi kae shorr ko
Sunane mien maza aane laga hai
Pal pal ke asmanjas mien
Ek nazaria kho jaane laga hai
Ghultee huee is hava mien
Saans lene ka maza aane laga hai
Harr din ik naya khawaab
Ye dil dikhane laga hai
Mushkil se jo dhoondhee thee yaad
Usae fir bhulane mien maza aane laga hai
Jaan mere tu jaanta hai
Phir bhi anjaane mien kho jaane laga hai
Apni galtiaan bhool kae
Ilzzam us pae lagane ka maza aane laga hai
My instant reaction...
ReplyDeleteBrilliant !! Reminds me of a song from Metro
"In dino dil mera, mujhse hai keh raha.
Tu khwaab saja, tu jee le zara
Hai tujhe bhi ijaazat, kar le tu bhi mohabbat"
wow!! beautifully written
ReplyDelete@Cuckoo,
ReplyDeleteOh thanks for relating my poem with something so beautiful. I hadn't seen Metro despite Aalok's repeated attempts at telling me how good it was. anyways now I have seen it. Loved the movie.
@Neeraja,
Hey thanks for liking it.