Ok! This aint no decent post. Not at all. They say "Behind every neat table, there is a cluttered drawer", well I have my own adaptation of this, "behind every neat desktop, there is a cluttered folder". In an attempt to clean up the various such cluttered folders on my laptop, I ran into this poem that I had written sometime back. It all started when I made an attempt at writing poems. Ahh, it is a failed attempt but I'm putting it up anywayz. My condolences to the readers :D
surrounded by darkness
my mind sleeps
dislocated memories
and wandering dreams
a world full of chaos
sorrow and grief
for what i see
makes my eyes bleed
inhumanity takes it's toll on me
live i must
to fullfil a dream
pain and suffering
have no place there to be!
my mind sleeps
dislocated memories
and wandering dreams
a world full of chaos
sorrow and grief
for what i see
makes my eyes bleed
inhumanity takes it's toll on me
live i must
to fullfil a dream
pain and suffering
have no place there to be!
Wah Wah kya baat hai !!
ReplyDeleteVery nice attempt at poetry. Much better than mine.
I think you've shown me this before. Looks familiar.. dislocated memories and all. And you are clever, you don't have to translate it also.
Chalo, I'll also try to put something then. :-)
@Cuckoo,
ReplyDeleteArrey zabardasti? I really don't think that any of my poems (so far) deserved to be read. You are far better off. Waise I thought that I might have posted this before, but couldnt find it on my blog. So I put it up. Shayd I might have emailed it to you or something like that, It aint on the blog before this.
Hey.
ReplyDeleteMind if I adapt it and make it my own?
@Rozie,
ReplyDeleteHey, plz do. I shall be honoured if you do so. Glad you asked first :D. By the way, where have you been of late. No new posts no nothing. We got some catching up to do.